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Grammar and Style ErrorsExamples of common grammar and stylistic errors
(particularly applicable to formal writing, but still potentially relevant in creative writing of any kind).
1. About sentence fragments
2. Don't write a run-on sentence you got to punctuate it.
3. Join clauses good like conjunctions should.
4. Each pronoun agrees with their antecendent.
5. In letters reports articles papers and stuff like that we use commas to keep a string of items apart.
6. Don't use commas, which aren't necessary.
7. Its important to use apostrophe's right.
8. Grammar and Style Errors
by ~WeCritique

Achievements Of a MannequinHis face is a focal point, as are his hands and hips and feet. Clothing upon his body doesn't truly fit him and it will never belong to him, he can never demonstrate self possession. The most he can do is extend his hands in gestures akin to a hooker requesting payment for services rendered. If some lesser female creature were seeking morning wood to screw and could get him into bed, she'd likely have only that to contend with because he's as wooden as they come - personality might be a bit wanting. The only real issue exists in the fact that, like all his other kindred, he is anatomically deficient Achievements Of a Mannequin
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Mr. Frog and Mr. Firefly.One day there was...a frog.

He was sitting on a lily pad in the middle of a pond.

his friend, Mr. Firefly came by and asked Mr. frog if he wanted to come over for dinner
Mr. frog said yes and soon he was at Mr. firefly's house

Mr. frog thanked his good friend for a wonderful time. Mr. firefly smiled and thanked Mr. frog for coming over
See, Mr. firefly was lonely, his wife having just died.

And he was really glad to have a great friend like frog
Mr. frog smiled back. See there is a story behind this. But I will not bore Mr. Frog and Mr. Firefly.
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Contest music poemI was sitting in the sunlight when it comes up
The Hotel (reprise) Says California has gone right to the left
And crashed in the head
Of John and Yoko Oh no! Watch out Paul your soul lover
Your mind fucker has gone away today
To listen to the hymn full tune Of Jim As he dies in a Paris hotel room It’s just the bad moon rising to the light of a new day Crying in the same way As my guitar gently weeps
Just remember don't fear the reaper 'Cause he's a secret keeper
He left Roger to drown In the Water's
W Contest music poem
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THIS WEEK IS OVER!

Sat Nov 4, 2006, 3:01 PM

Mood: Dazed
Listening to: Judas Priest - Breaking the Law
Reading: Textbook.

I'm gonna sing the doom song now! Doom doom doom . . .
-- G.I.R of Invader Zim

. . . and I am so fucking happy. A weight has been lifted from my shoulders. I'm kindof dizzy but that's ok, that's fine, because it's done.

I have completed my college applications, made straight A's this six-weeks, written ten new poems, slept, eaten like a normal, unhealthy [vegetarian] teenager, and taken the SAT. It's not completely over; I got extensions on my LCCC work so that's due Monday, Tuesday, and Wednesday. And of course CHS won't stop, but I might take Monday off.

Today was the day of the SAT, but it was also the day of this really big art show in Gainesville. My dad and I walked through it a couple times after the test. We have pretty much the same tastes when it comes to that stuff. We both wanted this one painting with a purple cat chewing on a red snake. The cat had jagged teeth and green eyes. It was awesome, but it was also a 300$ oil painting. Guess I'll mention it to Ms Hines if I go to school Monday. Fuck if I don't wanna go.

I might talk about the SAT later. I will definitely be discussing the essay part with my Freshmen Comp teacher on Tuesday.

Tonight I will read the rest of a chapter, post at a forum, and then eat pizza and re-read American Psycho. Tomorrow I will memorize my Spanish speech and the next day I will finish my make-up work, because Tuesday I will give blood again and I will then be too mellow and unwound to give a shit, which is what I suspect I really need.

Lots of crap will be posted this week, because I can. Cheers to all, except a few, and you know who and why you are. To you, get bent.

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Current Residence: under your bed
Interests: your mom
Favourite band or musician: Tool. Judas Priest. Metallica. Slayer. Megadeth. Iron Maiden. Bright Eyes. Beck.
Favourite poet or writer: Jim Morrison
Tools of the Trade: pencil and whatever's available to write on. preferably paper.